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Cross Country - Draft Writing Term 3

Draft Writing Doc.

Term 3

Week 8

Topic: Cross Country

Purpose:  To share my experience of it

Audience: My whanau 

Title: ………………..Cross Country - Draft Writing Term 3

utterly exhausted	given my all	thankful for the training
gasping for air	the end in sight	wishing
struggled onward	relieved it was over	sweating /perspiration
fatigued	hit the wall	grit and determination
squish and squelch	bogged down	given it my best shot
slowly trudged	one foot after the other	feeling proud/energised

Introduce - Who, what, when, where?

Para 1 - Cross Country Preparation. What did I do to prepare for Cross Country?

I would be warming up and making sure that I have my gear 

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Para 2 - Start/during the race. What happened at the start of the race? What happened during the race? In the star we would have to line up then we would 

Wait for misder burt to clap the clapper then you would have 

Para 3 - End of the race. What happened at the end of the race?I was gazing  through the gates one foot after another wants we were finished we had lots of

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Show Not Tell Task

Show Not Tell

Tell sentence: It was a cold and rainy day.

Show sentence: I was shivering outside  ass I was walking it was a very very Could day I jumped in the car and it was so could my geket was wheat the trees were  blown down it all Most fail on us we were terrified the windows was covered by the rain to dlery to see out the window .

                                      Tell sentence: I went to the beach.

Show sentence: I was sitting in the hot sun and my soft feet was seeking into the watering  sand I was looking at the lite blue water and there nice shady tree that I could sit under with coconuts up in the tree .

Tell sentence: Carol bought new shoes because hers broke.

Show sentence: my friend had broken shoes with holes in his shoes and shoelaces that don't match the color of his shoes   so he had to buy new  

shoes

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What i like about New Zealand is that we have a free land and most countries. Don’t  do that and we have nice pies and Australia Dustin  We celebrate other cultures  like Chinese festival and  Samoa language week. Or cook island language week we also have cool parks and beaches and at Australia you have to take half a day to get there . Our friends live close and we have tip top and they only make Ice cream .For us and only us I love new Zealand because we have cheap staff  and some staff are for free and we share staff and we don’t . Have snakes or eagle and we definitely don’t have lions in the zoo and we have good sport men ship and we have the 2 best teams in the world the all black’s and netball the boys bait the girls . I like And my family stay in new Zealand  and i like my school it is so cool I have the coolest teacher in the world and I have cool friends that are nice to me they share with me  and I have a cool. Rugby team I went to rainbow end and I went paint ball with them that is when you have a gun but there is a ball that has paint in it the end.