Don’t Let Go!
Write a story using the picture above as inspiration. Is this the beginning of the story or the end? Where is the carriage going and why? Who is the girl and how did she get there? What’s the deal with the duck and lizard? Where do those stairs go behind them?
Be creative….is it real life or fantasy? Sad or funny? Scary or possibly true?
EXPOSITION:
Who: dorothy
Where:in the sky
When:at 12:00 sunday
Hook:
BEGIN WRITING HERE: In the sky there was a girl named Junes who crossed the sky riding a horse but whenever she crossed the sky in a flash there are always stairs made out of clouds at the back of her. She lives in a invisibil house with clouds that she can ride on with her horses.when ever she lives her house she always rides on clouds wherever she goes the clouds underneath her As shrides along. She can see every dotty on the ground whenever she goes dut when she rides over the water. She loves to relax and look at the night sky. Her pets that sit at the back with her pumpkin when her horses yorn she knows to go back home when she arrives at home she feeds them then they go sleep when the sun rises thats when she goes to sleep good night.
Hi Teingoa,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed this creative piece of writing. I loved the way you described June. Keep up the good work.