I am a Year 7 student at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 5 and my teacher is Ms Tipene.
Thursday, 19 September 2019
Friday, 13 September 2019
Cross Country - Draft Writing Term 3
Draft Writing Doc.
Term 3
Week 8
Topic: Cross Country
Purpose: To share my experience of it
Audience: My whanau
Title: ………………..Cross Country - Draft Writing Term 3
utterly exhausted
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given my all
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thankful for the training
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gasping for air
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the end in sight
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wishing
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struggled onward
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relieved it was over
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sweating /perspiration
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fatigued
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hit the wall
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grit and determination
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squish and squelch
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bogged down
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given it my best shot
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slowly trudged
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one foot after the other
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feeling proud/energised
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Introduce - Who, what, when, where?
Para 1 - Cross Country Preparation. What did I do to prepare for Cross Country?
I would be warming up and making sure that I have my gear
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Para 2 - Start/during the race. What happened at the start of the race? What happened during the race? In the star we would have to line up then we would
Wait for misder burt to clap the clapper then you would have
Para 3 - End of the race. What happened at the end of the race?I was gazing through the gates one foot after another wants we were finished we had lots of
Tuesday, 10 September 2019
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