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Friday, 13 September 2019

Cross Country - Draft Writing Term 3

Draft Writing Doc.
Term 3
Week 8

Topic: Cross Country
Purpose:  To share my experience of it
Audience: My whanau 


Title: ………………..Cross Country - Draft Writing Term 3


utterly exhausted
given my all
thankful for the training
gasping for air
the end in sight
wishing 
struggled onward
relieved it was over
sweating /perspiration 
fatigued
hit the wall
grit and determination
squish and squelch
bogged down
given it my best shot
slowly trudged
one foot after the other
feeling proud/energised


Introduce - Who, what, when, where?



Para 1 - Cross Country Preparation. What did I do to prepare for Cross Country?
I would be warming up and making sure that I have my gear 


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Para 2 - Start/during the race. What happened at the start of the race? What happened during the race? In the star we would have to line up then we would 
Wait for misder burt to clap the clapper then you would have 



Para 3 - End of the race. What happened at the end of the race?I was gazing  through the gates one foot after another wants we were finished we had lots of

Friday, 9 August 2019

Show Not Tell Task

Show Not Tell


Tell sentence: It was a cold and rainy day.






Show sentence: I was shivering outside  ass I was walking it was a very very Could day I jumped in the car and it was so could my geket was wheat the trees were  blown down it all Most fail on us we were terrified the windows was covered by the rain to dlery to see out the window .




                                      Tell sentence: I went to the beach.
Show sentence: I was sitting in the hot sun and my soft feet was seeking into the watering  sand I was looking at the lite blue water and there nice shady tree that I could sit under with coconuts up in the tree .





Tell sentence: Carol bought new shoes because hers broke.


Show sentence: my friend had broken shoes with holes in his shoes and shoelaces that don't match the color of his shoes   so he had to buy new  

shoes

Wednesday, 3 July 2019

tale discussions

What i like about New Zealand is that we have a free land and most countries. Don’t  do that and we have nice pies and Australia Dustin  We celebrate other cultures  like Chinese festival and  Samoa language week. Or cook island language week we also have cool parks and beaches and at Australia you have to take half a day to get there . Our friends live close and we have tip top and they only make Ice cream .For us and only us I love new Zealand because we have cheap staff  and some staff are for free and we share staff and we don’t . Have snakes or eagle and we definitely don’t have lions in the zoo and we have good sport men ship and we have the 2 best teams in the world the all black’s and netball the boys bait the girls . I like And my family stay in new Zealand  and i like my school it is so cool I have the coolest teacher in the world and I have cool friends that are nice to me they share with me  and I have a cool. Rugby team I went to rainbow end and I went paint ball with them that is when you have a gun but there is a ball that has paint in it the end.

Friday, 7 June 2019

Exposition Task


Ingredient
How does this ingredient make the sandwich healthy?
Bread
Wholemeal Bread  is not fat it is healthy because of the seeds. wholegrain, multigrain, sourdough, rye is high fibre
Butter
sunflower seed butter is a healthy alternative for anyone that has peanut allergy
Meat
Pres roast Chicken  and there lots of protein Frying chicken, for example, boosts the meat's fat content, while eating
Lettuce
Romaine lettuce is another good source of folic acid. Its dark green color, long leaves, and crunchy texture make it a very popular salad base.
Tomatoes
Tomatoes are the major dietary source of the many health benefits,. They are also a great source of vitamin, potassium, folate, and vitamin
Cucumber
7 health Benefits of Eating Cucumber . Though commonly thought to be a vegetable,Cucumber is actually a fruit. ...
Carrot
The carrot (Daucus carota) is a root vegetable often claimed to be the perfect healthy food. It is crunchy, tasty, and highly nutritious. carrots are a particularly good source

Friday, 5 April 2019

        Camp highlights

I enjoyed camp because i got to go on a kayak me and my group was walking down the field. there was a triathlon we had to wait for twenty minutes me. and my group was talking for a little then it was finally finish we all was looking at Mr Burt we had. to listen to Him there was two kids who were helping Mr Burt they were showing as how to get in the kayak and how. to get out the kayak they said if you are with a buddy the. first person to get in the kayak is. the person in the font so the can bail ins the bout then the person at the back goes last then off you go! we also. had to do knife and spoon it means on one side it would be a spoon I went to the green triangle the end.

Thursday, 4 April 2019

writing tidal Discussions

If I could take my family anywhere I would take them to Cook Island .And so we can see our family  and see the church .so we can go fishing with my papa and .So we can go and see rakahanga we want to. See the Ocean and have a swim I never  been .There I like eating the fish a little bit and .The only reason I want to go there cause my naan always talks about it with me but I think next yeah we might go  my uncle said we are all saving up to go to cook island in 2020.

emotions

Friday, 29 March 2019

camp








In the holiday I went to Hamilton and we went camping. For one day we slept in a cabin. It was a cool as cabin because it Was so kleen and they had a .shower and A toilet it was kleener then my toilet we Went for a walk and then we went to the Opt course there was a dig wall I had to Jump on a long to get over my cousin was There as well there name is Teokotai Noa And Aj and my sisters taina and TERAPI .Then we went for a walk in the dark we Were not allowed light so we just had to Listen to the person in front of a it wasn't That long then the next day we went to


A mud pool we. were trying to touch


The mud then after that we went to Mangere town centre than everybody went Home put my cousin's k aim home with me


And then we went around the .farm beside Pt England school than we sore a walkway but we were on the other side of a creek than we sore a green long pipe Then .we walked across it my cousin nearly fail in the creek when we got across we said that were crag of the creek Than we were.

walking around than the next day my cousin had to go home because it was the last day then i had to go sleep it was 8:30 the end.

Sunday, 17 March 2019

teingoa Describing me ✌


Hi my name is teingoa I am ten years old .I describe myself as humble Because when I play rugby. I don't Tell people how good I am but i show how good I am and I am kind because I  help Family and friends i help my family with doing the Dishes and i help dy doing my Bed . I am
Respectful because I treat people the way I wanted to be treated.

Thursday, 7 March 2019

writing



On the holidays we went camping For to days we went to Whatipu Because my cousin is moving to Australia we all wanted to spend time with him and .His little sister is going with him as well and my anty And we all wanted to go to the water Hole we all did some doms but It was so cold sometimes we walk to the cave’s. and the beach and Me and my cousins did a trans Off The tree my cousin is the Best he did the big's boms a Tran means like wen 1 person go’s of the tree into the .water and then another person we had a BBQ


We had lam heart and steak.


Plus Patties and sausages the end .